Tuesday, April 7, 2009

Obsessed

I have sparred...
Raved and ranted
Cursed
Queried and pretended
To throw this hail of feelings aside
Still,
It haunts like a ghost
Holding a mortar in the dead of the night
Rumbling and violently too
From door to door
And room to room


Who’s coming to take this pain away
Bringing back that smile
Reminiscent of the times
When everything was kewl
In my life...
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10 comments:

  1. Ugandan girlApril 7, 2009 at 1:31 AM

    i am here...cant you see me...?

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  2. ButtercupApril 7, 2009 at 7:31 PM

    she's coming soon, don't worry..

    btw u were the Lumidee I mentioned on my blog..the story was bloggers-themed..

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  3. PHApril 7, 2009 at 11:36 PM

    But memories cannot come back, just smile anew albeit with someone new.

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  4. PHApril 7, 2009 at 11:36 PM

    Yo, these rhymes are ill.

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  5. trybesApril 8, 2009 at 1:45 AM

    @ Uggurl..Thanks for that soothin extended hands..but cant even see your face..lol.cuz you only have an avatar posted...

    @Buttercup..oh comin soon?..lol..that sounds like a flick off some holywood movie..lol...I hope i didnt hurt you so much..with you bumpin into my arewa,,,hehe

    @Nev..Yea you right..I sure will pick up on your advise..Thanks for checkin in...

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  6. RobynApril 8, 2009 at 3:47 AM

    dude.gat the message
    well placed lines
    not a verse less.

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  7. trybesApril 8, 2009 at 10:58 AM

    @Robyn..Thanks for checkin in..hope to see you back again..

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  8. My worldApril 8, 2009 at 12:17 PM

    We all seem to be on a roll with poems and love letters on blogville lately...
    9ice though,really smooth.

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  9. Miz ArkitectApril 11, 2009 at 1:07 AM

    now i am hooked. Two and counting. Lovely written. expresses the true journey of what used to be a no more.

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  10. TRYBESApril 11, 2009 at 1:46 AM

    @ my world..Yes o!..It helps a great deal when you can pour your heart out and blogville is the only place where such is allowed..Thanks for checkin in ..Appreciated..

    @ The Pardigm..That sounds really deep.."The true journey of what used to be a no more"..Guess you were on the same journey as i was...Hopefully i'd be singin the same tune soon...

    Appreciate your checkin in ...and most def gonna check in on ya pretty soon...

    Have a very lovely weekend and a sweet and blissful easter celebs...

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