Let your love find me
In this valley that I hide
Lookin out from the window
It’s been so dark in here
With days of solitude
Yet I see the light
Burning like a fire in your hands
Asking you to light this place
The place I call my heart
Drinking and Dry January
1 year ago
wow..great little poem u've got here...
ReplyDeleteThe asking you to light this place i call my heart part just resonates wit where i am with God at the moment.
Thx for stopping by.... Looks like my commenting issues were due to my firefox browser..
Beautiful Poem. This made me cry.
ReplyDeleteaww Thanks for this :)
Nice blog sir!
They say less is more.
ReplyDeleteThe power of this poem is in its brevity.
Was it inspired by an experience?
Well Mr. Lumidee (your name begs for a nickname), I see you have a little game about you ...nice poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping through my site ...don't forget to come back and visit.
aargh so it is a firefox thingy@ DB?
ReplyDeleteNice post
Short and nice...true love better find me and soon too.
ReplyDeleteShort and nice...
ReplyDeleteawwwwwwww sweet..i hope u get found :)
ReplyDeleteI really love this...something about the whole thing resonates with me.
ReplyDeleteAfronut took the words right of my mouth. as an Architect, i am a strong follower of "Less is More" by Ludwig Mies van der Rohe and since i relate everything to architecture : ) thats what i felt reading this piece. The few lines speaks a thousand words in the heart of the reader. Brilliant !!!
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